1. Jennifer went home crying after someone at the party called her fat.

2. Jorge blanched when his barber declared that his hair was too delicate to dye.

3. The children were frightened when the substitute teacher grinned maniacally.

4. "I'm not sure the open floor plan is appropriate for this house," said the designer.

5. Many mothers found the class project to be a little too gory for classroom usage.


2)
Which two sentences from the above question have been rewritten to contain strong connotations?
A) The children were confused when the substitute teacher grinned half-heartedly.
B) Jorge blanched when his barber declared that his hair was far too wimpy to dye.
C) Jennifer went home crying after someone at the party called her slightly overweight.
D) Many mothers found the class project to be a little too intense for classroom usage.
E) "The suggestion open floor plan for this house is a complete travesty!" said the designer.